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Some Musings July 14, 2008

Filed under: Poetry — fishgrip @ 1:23 pm

I’m enrolled in an on-line poetry class at Rider University this summer. Here are two pieces I had some fun creating. The first is an interrelated haiku series. It’s written in the traditional haiku form: 3 lines that follow the 5-7-5 rule (first line is 5 syllables, second line is 7 syllables, 3rd line is 5 syllables). It was fun to tie all 5 haikus together to build a “story” with a beginning, middle and end. The other poem is a sonnet written in the Shakespearean tradition with alternate rhyming verses, (loosely) following the Iambic Pantameter rule (stressed/unstressed pronunciation pattern, i.e.: da-DUH-da-DUH-da-DUH-da-DUH-da-DUH…) Don’t mind the disturbing imagery…

Appreciating a Housefly: A Haiku Series

Such repellent stench
Flies buzz with an ecstasy
Unknown to lives wild.

Putrid. Pungent. Foul.
Frantic feeding frenzy where
Rank larvae emerge

Diapers, rancid meat.
Filthiest barrel bottom,
Where slick maggots squirm

Pupae acting fast.
Survival of a species
relies on refuse

Decomposition
occurs, recurs again as
carpe diem, flies

I know it’s revolting, but who waxes poetic about a housefly? I mean, really? A few classmates of mind were admittedly wretching, so I guess the poetry is effective? The sonnet takes a softer approach…

Infanity – A Sonnet

If I were an infant… pure and genuine,
The world awaiting would grant me no harm.
I’d have no true burning desire than when
My head lay soft and nestled in her arm.
If only my time would never have shown
Such stinging barbs of brutal grief and pain,
I’d have suckled the breast of wisdom less known,
And nursed an ignorant bliss to sustain.
Still, I dare not pray for a life well led,
Spare me your cradles bumpered with ease.
For when I rest my broken, battered head
To lasting peace pray my innocence release.
Mothers tenderly kiss soft heads and weep,
With leaden secrets in their hearts to keep.

 

Golden Grace November 12, 2007

Filed under: Poetry — fishgrip @ 7:19 pm

Breathing in crisp
yellow
fallow
inhaling
refreshing bluest skies

Cooling in warmth
breathe in
heave out
inviting
igniting truest eyes

Stopping in weary
respite
despite
inflicting
weeping deepest hole

Staring at setting Son
binding
blinding
seeing
healing tempest soul

Lapping up Light
basking
asking
receiving
being

Home

 

Evolution – A Poem? September 27, 2007

Filed under: Poetry — fishgrip @ 1:07 pm

i wanted to be pretty
so i worked in a clothing store
for the discount

i wanted nice hair
so i worked at a salon
to figure out how to get it

i wanted to become a veterinarian
so i got a job at a vet hospital
to see if i would like it

i wanted to love my job
to work with quality people that cared
so i quit

i wanted a passionate love life
one with romance and laughter and light
so i broke up with my boyfriend

i wanted to heal
to lick my wounds and forgive myself
so i went on retreat

i wanted to see the world
to learn of its vastness and majesty
so i traveled

i wanted something real
something lasting, something true
so i married the love of my life

i wanted to play an instrument
to feel how music can alter a soul
so i took piano lessons

i wanted touching relationships
with friends and family and neighbors
so i asked questions and listened

i wanted to feel the wind
flowing freely through my hair
so i rode horses

i wanted to help people
to contribute to my community
so i joined a church ministry

i wanted to follow my dreams
to work in a field i could be proud of
so i worked for the environment

i wanted something challenging, redeeming, rewarding
to feel a burning pulse beneath my very skin
so i had a baby

i wanted to raise my child
to watch her grow and thrive
so i worked from home

i wanted to explore my creative side
to see if i really could write
so i wrote a screenplay

i wanted to be graceful
to be soft and beautiful
so i took ballet classes

i wanted to capture beauty
to hold it in the palm of my hand
so i learned how to paint

i wanted to get in shape
to lose my mommy belly
so i ran a 5k

i wanted to be like jane goodall
to understand her life and her love
so i went and met her

i wanted wisdom
to have patience and prudence
so i prayed for it

i want to evolve
every single day
so i…